Wow, gorgeous! Elizabeth is very sweet, and I can see her falling in love with Allie - but also being aware that she's intruding somewhat. She handles it so well, and tactfully! And then the story she reads is a perfect description for her acquaintance with the Smiths. Noting that the soup and cookies are good for helping daddies too is WIN.
Also? Watching Severus sleeping, tired and unguarded - LOVE love love a;sdlfj;!!! What a rare moment in any fic, and a precious one. *happy sigh*