Sorry, but I'm going to point out a few spelling corrections: juunin-> jounin juuchinkirii->jinchuuriki carefull-> have an extra 'l' Kurinai-> Kurenai consiquences-> consequences sharunigan-> Is this on purpose? It seems as though it could be based on the fact that it's surrounded by quotations. Akatsukai- Akatsuki retreival-> retrieval Neiblehime-> Niebelheim shiruken-> shuriken
Iruka is very awesome, and I'm glad to see him getting some love! So, this is sort of, if Cloud and Zack took Naruto before he became a genin? That's pretty interesting, and I'd love to see more!