Thanks! That was definitely the turning point, and I'm glad it made the impact I wanted it to.
And, you know, I toyed with the idea of either Harry or Severus saying, "Fuck the reservations," and dragging the other into the bedroom. But I really wanted to leave the impression that Harry was proud of Severus, and loved the way he looked so much, that he couldn't wait to take him out to some fancy restaraunt and show him off. XD