That ending was so sad! :( Harry isn't going to end up with Ginny, is he? Especially after she pulled that stunt it'd seem so wrong.
It's really good. I sort of felt hopeful up until the very end when Severus decided to be stupidly self-sacrificing for Harry's sake when it wouldn't do Harry any good. I'd like to read more if you plan to do more, but I don't know if I'd be able to read too much angst atm. I'd love to see Severus come to his senses and jump through hoops to win Harry back (it'd serve him right having to work for it >:) ).