This was breath taking. I loved that this was from Severus POV, it made it more intimate. And regardless of all the things Harry did to Severus this "I love you, Severus," he says, his voice astonished and vulnerable, "and I want you to love me too." was said with so much honesty and openess, Severus must know it was true and obeyed willingly.
A truly beautiful piece of fiction and one of the best I've read this kink!night, well done sweetie *squishes*