“Very well.” Severus took a sip of his drink. “When shall I collect you?”
Now? Harry swallowed.
That's a wonderful line. And I love the style of the whole piece- Harry and Hermione's relationship was nice to see, and I love Harry's inner monologue throught the whole thing! And how, after two minutes with Severus, Harry came to see that he did have all the traits he was looking for. Moreover, that Severus could demonstrate all those characteristics within two minutes. Gosh, I really love this one. And possessive!Snape- that's probably one of my favorite things in fandom, ever. Possessive either of them, actually, but especially possessive!Snape. *grin* I'm so glad you wrote this- I adore it. *saves link to reread later* Excellent job! Two extra points to Slytherin, I think. : )