No no no, it rang true! Although... IDK, perhaps I generally expect more of a caring note in the dom? Generally I am closer to going with the flow of a fic rather than only tolerating BDSM. I definitely couldn't write it, but elements to read are ok. Perhaps it's that - I can accept elements, but not a whole scenario... *wanders off to ponder reactions* One of the side-benefits of reading all kinds of fiction - self-discovery :)