First, I have that same Snape-y doll. When I saw him in the picture I looked at my own and thought 'he sure gets around.'
Second, this must have taken you so long! I love Snape's little hat and sweater. And the little monologue he gives is so perfectly Severus and hilarious.
And I like the little pre-slash ending, with Harry wishing Severus to wake up.
This was so cute and adorable and hilarious and I absolutely loved it.