Wow. First off, can I just say that I am so surprised this doesn't have more reviews? I mean, wow. This was really good. Exceptionally so.
I love the bitterness in Severus' tone, the trueness of it all. You captured the teenaged loathing so well!
Pettigrew. JC. I kind of wish Severus had just hexed him. *shudders* I can hear Severus' tone, cold and brittle as he tells Peter off. It warms my heart. ;)