Oh, a Severitus fic was a bit of a twist for this fest. I must say I wasn't expecting it, so it comes as a breath of fresh air.
I enjoyed your writing style and attention to details. You have an excellent way of incorporating descriptions that still keeps the plot moving. But I am left with burning questions: What did he do to the Dursleys? What reaping is DD going to be doing? Where did they go after vanishing from the lake? I want to dig inside your head and view the rest of the story!