As I said in the yahoo group, I absolutely loved this story. I had to go back and read your earlier fics just so I could have more of your yumminess.
They both looked towards the man in question, who took that moment to scratch what looked like a bad case of psoriasis on his hand. Neville nearly gagged. Harry smiled.
too funny. And awesome. And makes me love Harry, Snape, and Neville even more.
You have such a way with words - you express such depths in such an economical fashion. I know many people don't like to bother with ficlets or drabbles - they can only be satisfied with a novel-length fic. But the evocative shorts are so delicious... especially yours.