I have said this before, and I will say this again: Cute! :3 From the first, war-like scenes in the beginning that make you wonder just *what* is going on, to the slow, cautious development of Harry jumping out of hiding in an attempt to reason with the warring party (hehe! this is the funny part!), to the war's reluctant peace (love the comparative images of the 'war party' to animalism comparison!), to the final offer that strengthens peace (ice cream!). It took me a while to realize just what the translation to the last line was, but I sounded it out phonetically, imagining that with an inflammatory tooth ache some consonants will prove difficult to pronounce, and relying on what I knew of the previous line (ice cream conversation and knowing that Severus is quite logical, speech-wise), concluded that it was something about that ice cream offer to which he was referring. :)
It is a very cute muggle!dentist!approach to a hurting Severus. You make me wonder just how much different a wizarding healer would be, should Harry and Severus have gone to him, instead of to a dentist. ;)