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Torina Archelda ([info]torina_archelda) wrote in [info]severus_sighs,
@ 2009-10-02 15:50:00

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Entry tags:challenge, drabble, event: anniversary 2009, member: torina_archelda, pairing: severus/harry, rating: g

19 Years Later by Torina Archelda
Title: 19 Years Later
Author: [info]torina_archelda
Pairing: Severus/Harry
Rating: G
Word Count: 100
Warnings: none
Summary: Response to the Severus Sighs Anniversary 2009 Drabble Challenge
A/N: Thanks to [info]thesewarmstars for the beta and [info]lemondropseven for the inspiration!

Harry gasped as he woke, and it was several terrifying moments before he remembered where he was. He shivered slightly and turned over, cuddling closer to his lover and trying to shake the remnants of his nightmare.

“Harry?” Severus murmured, wrapping an arm around Harry and pulling him closer with a sleepy sigh. “What’s wrong?”

Harry shuddered a bit and pressed his face into the crook of Severus’ neck. “I dreamed I was married to Ginny Thomas, and that we had three children together.”

Severus’ eyes snapped open in horror. “It’s okay,” he reassured him. “It was just a dream.”



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[info]thesewarmstars
2009-10-02 09:30 pm UTC (link)
I knew there was something off about that epilogue! The way the colors were watery and people who were meant to be alive were dead and there was no birdsong! That's a sure sign of a nightmare right there, no birdsong.

*nods sagely*

Great work. ( ;

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[info]torina_archelda
2009-10-02 09:37 pm UTC (link)
Hahaha. Yes, the lack of birdsong was telling. *grin* Haha. Thanks for the laugh. xD

Glad you liked it!! And thanks for the beta. : )

~Torina

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[info]ex_lilyseyes671
2009-10-02 10:00 pm UTC (link)
LOL!

This is the way Book 7 should have ended!

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[info]torina_archelda
2009-10-02 10:00 pm UTC (link)
Haha. Thanks!! I like to imagine it did. *grin*

~Torina

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[info]gingertart50
2009-10-02 10:48 pm UTC (link)
Heh, of course this is how it REALLY was. Excellent!

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[info]torina_archelda
2009-10-03 12:03 am UTC (link)
Haha, yes, of course! *grin* Thanks!

~Torina

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[info]accioslash
2009-10-02 11:23 pm UTC (link)
Hahahahaha! I had this same dream. Good to know it was just a nighmare and we all know what really happened. ;D

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[info]torina_archelda
2009-10-03 12:05 am UTC (link)
Oh, did you really? Interesting that we're channeling each other. I wrote this because I had that dream, too! And- you'd never believe it- Severus died in mine. I mean, talk about nightmare! Good thing it will never happen, right? *grin*

~Torina

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[info]atypicalsnowman
2009-10-02 11:36 pm UTC (link)
Gah! Terrible nightmare. I just had a dream where warmie conjured the giant squid and it lived in our apartment.

Ugh.

NIce drabble!

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[info]atypicalsnowman
2009-10-02 11:51 pm UTC (link)
HAHAHAHA! Okay, I wrote that right as I woke up. Sorry. What I meant to say was that was an excellent drabble and that I, also, had a terrible dream but not as bad as Harry/Ginny.

*hugs you*

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[info]torina_archelda
2009-10-03 12:07 am UTC (link)
Haha. *pokes snow* Would you rate that better or worse than dreams of the apocalypse? Least it was a squid and not a whale. xD

Glad you liked it!!

~Torina

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[info]atypicalsnowman
2009-10-04 05:39 am UTC (link)
Oh, God why?! The squid was almost as bad as the whale! With its tentacles and its eye and its beak!

*shivers*

*clears throat*

So...your drabble...still good on second reading. *thumbs up*

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[info]torina_archelda
2009-10-07 02:59 am UTC (link)
Aw. Poor snow. *pets* May your dreams tonight be happier. : )

Haha. Thank you. Glad you like it ^^

~Torina

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[info]aeryun
2009-10-02 11:38 pm UTC (link)
Harry shuddered a bit and pressed his face into the crook of Severus’ neck. “I dreamed I was married to Ginny Thomas, and that we had three children together.”

And that is a HUGE nightmare! Harry is lucky that he didn't scream! :D

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[info]torina_archelda
2009-10-03 12:09 am UTC (link)
Hahaha. I should have written it that way! Harry wakes Severus with a scream and Severus is upset til he tells him what happened. xD Haha. Thanks for commenting!

~Torina

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[info]separatrix
2009-10-03 12:46 am UTC (link)
Brilliance! I think we all had that same horrible nightmare. Thank goodness it's been cleared up!

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[info]torina_archelda
2009-10-03 12:50 am UTC (link)
Yes, we all seemed to share a bit of a mind for that one, hm? But yes, the problem's been solved. Nothing to worry about!

*grin*

~Torina

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[info]bk7brokemybrain
2009-10-03 02:23 am UTC (link)
The whole damned book was a nightmare! Hence my penname....

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[info]torina_archelda
2009-10-03 02:28 am UTC (link)
Ha. Wasn't it, though? Couldn't stand the thing, honestly. Read it once and never again. I actually needed it for reference yesterday and couldn't find it... I felt like an idiot, and thesewarmstars laughed at me. I laughed at myself. xD But can you blame me? The book was a train wreck...

<3

~Torina

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[info]torino10154
2009-10-03 02:47 am UTC (link)
A horrible nightmare that! *shudders* ;) Excellent fix, er, I mean drabble.

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[info]torina_archelda
2009-10-03 03:00 am UTC (link)
Haha. Isn't it though? Glad you liked it!! And your icon makes me lol. xD

<3 Torina

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[info]calanor
2009-10-03 06:20 am UTC (link)
If I could give points.. I would award you a 1000 points..

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[info]torina_archelda
2009-10-03 08:13 pm UTC (link)
Hahaha. Thanks, Kim! Glad you liked it. *grin*

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[info]fancypantsdylan
2009-10-03 08:24 am UTC (link)
Mwuh ha ha ah HA HA! See I knew that epilogue was dodgy. Now we must go change all of them to this one :D

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[info]torina_archelda
2009-10-03 08:14 pm UTC (link)
Haha, yes! Everyone hand me your copy of DH. I'll edit it for you... *grin* Though there will be one copy we won't be able to edit- I absolutely cannot find mine. Read it once and never opened it again- and then when I needed it the other day for reference I couldn't find it! Haha. Guess that shows how much I liked it, hm? xD

*hugs Sarah*

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[info]quill_lumos
2009-10-03 04:22 pm UTC (link)
lol!!!

yep, terrible nightmare, right there.

*hugs*

Lucie xx

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[info]torina_archelda
2009-10-03 08:15 pm UTC (link)
Hehe. Isn't it though? *huggles Lucie* Glad to make you laugh!!

~Torina

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[info]whitecotton
2009-10-03 05:49 pm UTC (link)
Yes yes yes! That is exactly what happened! Thank you, sweetie, for telling the real story.

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[info]torina_archelda
2009-10-03 08:16 pm UTC (link)
*nods seriously* Yep. Exactly. And, you know, Draco didn't name his kid Scorpious either. Only I thought of that after I'd posted the drabble. xD

*grabs your copy of DH and scribbles in the margins* Ah, there we go! See, all better. *nods again* Yep, that's what really happened. ^^

~Torina

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[info]snafu07
2009-10-03 09:15 pm UTC (link)
HAHAHA!

That rocked! We knew it wasn't true and now we have proof :)

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[info]torina_archelda
2009-10-03 09:16 pm UTC (link)
^^ Thanks! Glad you liked it and that you can join me in my little epilogue-less universe. *grin*

~Torina

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[info]lemondropseven
2009-10-04 04:13 am UTC (link)
Teehee.
Conversations at 2am with you always produce the most interesting things. XD
Photobucket

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[info]torina_archelda
2009-10-07 02:54 am UTC (link)
Oh my gosh, I love your little heart icony thing! That is so cute! *hugs* And yes, yes they do. xD

*hugs*

~Torina

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[info]lemondropseven
2009-10-07 03:11 am UTC (link)
Thanks! I was playing with different signatures for my comments... I'm such a dork sometimes. *facepalm* But at least you like it. :D

Yay for crazy conversations!

*hugs*
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[info]snapesfavorite
2009-10-04 03:14 pm UTC (link)
Torina, I knew I liked you for a reason.

;-)

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[info]torina_archelda
2009-10-07 02:56 am UTC (link)
Haha. Thank you! *hugs Sabrina* I've missed hearing from you. Glad to see you're back!!

~Torina

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[info]magialuna
2009-10-05 05:10 pm UTC (link)
Excellent ending for Book 7. *nods in happy appreciation.*

I think Hermione married to Ron is rather a nightmare as well...

May they all wake up much happier than JKR left them.

Clare

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[info]torina_archelda
2009-10-07 02:57 am UTC (link)
Hahahahaha. Well Hermione can't have Harry because Severus has got him, so I'm actually okay with Hermione/Ron. xD But that's the magic of this little drabble- the entire epilogue was fantasy! So you can make up anything you want. You can put Hermione with Hagrid if you want. xDDD

Thanks- I'm glad you enjoyed it!!!

~Torina

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[info]magialuna
2009-10-07 04:13 am UTC (link)
EEEW! That is one character I rarely read fanfics on... there was that ONE funny Hagrid/Squid story but... still, ICK. (That would hurt, no??)

Harry and Sev is a good match, true.

Hermione would do much better with Draco or Lucius. Both intelligent men who, now that it is no longer appropriate to look down upon Muggleborns, would do well as a mate to a brilliant witch. Ron makes me think too much of an uncouth guy who comes home every night, grabs a six pack of beer, parks his butt on the sofa and turns on the telly to watch Quidditch all night. He would of course expect Hermy to pop out the little red heads, take care of them and the house and cook lovely dinners (like a Molly Jr...)

If Harry gets a smart, sexy man then Hermione deserves one too.

I am not picky on pairings among my fave characters (SS, HG, HP, DM and LM) any in that group seem to fit well together as I think Hermione proved repeatedly she is quite cunning and could easily stand up to a Slytherin, just as Harry did. (They seem to 'pair' up into threesomes well too... lol.) Some of my fave fanfics have been SS/LM/HG, SS/HP/DM, SS/HP/LM... there are a couple really hot DM/LM/HG too.... : )

Ron needs to pair up with someone like Pansy Parkinson who will train him properly...

Clare

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[info]torina_archelda
2009-10-07 05:44 pm UTC (link)
Iiiick. I was kidding about Hagrid, who's bad enough- but with the squid?? Nasty..... *shudders* And, ha, yeah, it probably would.... Haha. xD

Ehh. Draco I can handle when written properly. Lucius... I don't know. I can handle stories where he's a child or a teenager, and you see his development. But I can't go from canon Lucius straight into a good man. Because really... he wasn't. He was a predjudiced jerk who didn't see any problem with hurting and persecuting people. I just see him as very, very dark in canon. And not in a good way like our Severus. I mean there are stories that can explain away his role, and that's all right. But they have to do a good job of it, because just taking the man straight from canon isn't good enough for me.

You're right that Hermione deserves a good man though. *grin* I actually *whispers* read some HG/SS back in the day. If I had friends that were fans of it I still probably would, but I live mostly off of recs now because I don't have time to search fics out myself. xD And I see your point about Ron- I really think JKR ruined his character with book seven. In the other books we could deal with his jealousy and betrayal of Harry because he was a kid. But as a seventeen year old- almost an adult- she has to bring that back? And make it seem like he hasn't grown or matured at all? I had a real problem with that, because it seemed like she forgot she was writing about people who were supposed to be real, and not one-dimensional and flat and never-changing. So yes... The way she described him at the end of book seven, I can see that picture your paint of him. I'd much rather for him to have grown up into a good man. But she just gave him so many character flaws. :/

Haha, well I don't really read threesomes but I don't have anything too much against them. Whatever makes them all happy, right? xD Incest isn't my cup of tea, so I wouldn't go for anything with both Draco and Lucius. Plus... Well I think you can tell I don't care much for Lucius. xD [Though I keep writing things where he's a good person.... xD Blame WhiteCotton. I do it for her. xD].

LOL at poor Ron! Yeah, he could use a bit of manners though. xDDD

~Torina

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