Wow, you did this in Paint!? ... bu .. bu .. but ... *bows to your awesomeness*
I agree with everyone that the symbolism of the hands on his shoulders was well brought out. The colors for Lily and DD really pop and show the only bright points of his life.
For some reason, Harry looks older than James. Maybe it's the shading. He would be--life has thrown a lot of crap his way. I like the shading on Severus too. Makes him look far older than he really is.