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MIRROR ENTRY – COMMENTS DISABLED
By: Margaret Price
Posted: March 2, 2008
Notes: I realize this will sound odd, but I think this is the most visual story thus far. The author seems very comfortable with the way the characters have been established and is now playing with them. The wonderful wordless images that tell us exactly what the character is thinking. The Major and his men on the plane is a great example. (page 179) She also takes full advantage of the “vastness” of Alaska. There are lots of lovely backgrounds and sweeping landscapes. (pages 181-2, 198, 199, 202,)
BOOK FOUR
Story 9 Part 1
ALASKAN FRONT
( The Royal 'we' continues to annoy me. )
( Quite a few observations and aside comments. )
( The Quotes. )
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END STORY NINE - PART 1
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Story Nine - Alaskan Front - Part 2a
By: Margaret Price
Posted: March 2, 2008
Notes: I realize this will sound odd, but I think this is the most visual story thus far. The author seems very comfortable with the way the characters have been established and is now playing with them. The wonderful wordless images that tell us exactly what the character is thinking. The Major and his men on the plane is a great example. (page 179) She also takes full advantage of the “vastness” of Alaska. There are lots of lovely backgrounds and sweeping landscapes. (pages 181-2, 198, 199, 202,)
Story 9 Part 1
ALASKAN FRONT
( The Royal 'we' continues to annoy me. )
( Quite a few observations and aside comments. )
( The Quotes. )
END STORY NINE - PART 1
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NOTE: These are all being saved to the community's memories to make it easier to locate any one particular story.
Story Nine - Alaskan Front - Part 2a
