I liked the idea of the second person (oddly enough, since I normally dislike it), but one thing that confused me was the use of all the "will"s? So it's something that's not happened, but is a prediction of what will happen?
I'm a non-native speaker for the record, so such stuff always get me confused
At any rate, I thought it was an interesting piece, and something that made for a very enjoyable short read. Thanks for sharing!