not loving certain facial expressions, rest of the art is great though, let me guess, Rene cuts in?
the whole in the closet thing... i'm forgeting, but i thought the reason for the break up was more for the fact that Rene got moody... and I am guessing this takes place a little after the first time they met. WHen they first met she might have still been in West point, might have broken up, and then was outed, dont forget, rene was closeted too until GC.