Re: Noirsensei wonders...
I completely agree re: the art. The story may be wholly passable (I wouldn't know), but it looks like there's problems with about half the faces this guy draws. Some of the drawings are really cute, but that contrasts with the apparently-not-rare occasion where someone tries to make a facial expression and suddenly looks developmentally disabled.
I don't like the whole dude-looks-like-a-lady effect coming from the females' proportions. It's like well-colored David Gonterman here.