Whoa, I totally never noticed before that the folks in that huddle of people Spidey is protecting against all comers are:
- Mary Jane - Aunt May - J. Jonah Jameson
That's really, really interesting.
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Also, I love your dream! I like that it can work on a number of levels, and it can be used as a vehicle for insights for characters other than Peter (like Venom and Jessica). You could make the ending more or less ambiguous, and there are probably a few pre-existing characters that could slot in for Joe -- Dr. Strange is the most obvious, but I'm sure there are others I'm less familiar with me.
I wish my dreams were that cool. You should keep this somewhere and wait for the inevitable reboot cycle (tm), and try to make sure that you're published somewhere by then so you can pitch it to Marvel ;).