1. I love how the newspaper text, instead of being generic "asoafbaskfjb" is NONONONONO, mirroring MJ's word balloon.
2. Also, Peter's reaction to May/Jarvis is mature, in-character, and entertaining to read. Compare with "OH NOES, PETER WALKED IN ON MAY AND JAMESON, SEND IN THE BRAIN BLEACH EL-OH-EL!" One is a story written by adults, about adults, for adults. The other I am probably precluded from further describing due to the new rules.