[fidgets a little while waiting for you to read. :x]
[Her penmanship is pretty good. It starts out super neat but gets progressively messier as the essay goes on. Despite the change, it remains legible, and there are even a couple places where she's crossed out words and rewritten them for legibility.
The main points she covers in her essay are: - A soul is something intangible that is nonetheless an integral part of who a person is, it's not just personality but encompasses every little thing that makes them who they are. Your soul is your self, what makes you you. - They are very significant, because they are a person's self. It doesn't matter if you're human or only part-human or whatever, you have a soul because you are still a person whatever your body's make-up. - They are not insignificant at all.
Her essay rambles a little in places and it doesn't have the classic head-body-body-body-conclusion structure. To the discerning eye it's definitely clear that she wrote herself into corners once or twice and then had to dig herself out because she didn't outline ahead of time. However, she does have the requisite five paragraphs and it doesn't take much close reading to get the gist of what she's trying to say.
At one point she alludes to her own soul being important to her for a reason other than the one above but she abandons that train of thought quickly and it never comes up again.]