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evaakeru ([info]evaakeru) wrote in [info]rp_tutorials,
First off...did none of the mods of these games indicate what the issue was with your application? You intimate that they did not but I certainly hope that isn't the case.

Second..What you've got feels like a 'cliff notes' version of her life. You could basically stick a bullet in front of each blurb you have which would almost make it a timeline of important dates. Tell us a little story of her life/history; give a bit more insight/feeling into those moments that have shaped her up to current.

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