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Tweak says, "Hello Jess"

𝐋𝐮𝐜𝐤𝐲 𝐆𝐢𝐫𝐥 (pickpickler) wrote in rp_tutorials,
@ 2012-01-26 14:58:00

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question: cdj

May I be a pest and ask for a second opinion on my CDJ here? I’m still working on it some, but I wouldn’t mind some feedback. Like if there is more I should include, some I should take out, layout easy enough on the eyes, etc?

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forsythia
2012-01-27 01:42 am UTC (link)

I love the layout, actually. It's very easy on the eyes without being too plain. I would, however, give a little nudge that the banner for Where's Tammy Wynette is missing an apostrophe; it's no big deal, of course, but I did notice it very quickly.

The way you set up your character list and examples looks neat and well organized per entry, and the profile navigation/index is a nice touch. I'd perhaps suggest also using tags to further organize (by character and page type), though, since anyone who goes directly to your journal page may not realize there's an index.

As for the information provided: I think you've got most of the bases covered (if not all). Nothing seems to be out of place or unnecessary to me, so I wouldn't suggest removing anything.

Overall, I think you're doing a good job with your CDJ.

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pickpickler
2012-01-27 08:10 am UTC (link)

Thank you, I really took my time with the layout wanting the colors and patterns to be nice, but simple. The only reason the “Where’s Tammy Wynnette” banner doesn’t have an apostrophe is the font I used to make it, doesn’t include them. It’s actually been kind of bothering me, so I’ll very likely go in to edit it today and give it one through a different font style. I have been debating using tags, but I do believe you are right in how they further organize. So I’ll very likely add those in today as well.

Thank you so much for taking the time to look it over for me and give me some honest feedback on it. I really appreciate it, especially when I’ll admit I haven’t been completely sure what all should be included or not. LOL!

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