Oh man, that was superbly chilling. I love how well you captured the tense atmosphere, and how you portrayed the characters. But I must say that most of all I am ecstatic at how you wove Leoben into the storyline. He's such an intriguing personality to begin with, and with the heavy dogma that surrounds the histories of Ivalice, he really does fit in there well. And, wow. You captured his voice so well. This is one of those stories that I can really see and hear being played out through the words written.