Hi, Mimosa Crook here. I don't know what to say, except THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!
It absolutely love it. I love the style, I love the themes, I love the way the story manages to show in just a few words the depth of the world you imagined. It's harsh and heartbreaking, but also so very hopeful and touching. I found myself close to tears once or twice, and that doesn't happen often when I'm reading fanfiction! (okay, maybe the lingering anesthesia from the dentist had something to do with it, but still.)
The only thing I had reservations about was Monikelen's characterization, but the explanation you gave at the end was perfect and made absolute sense.
And of course, the touches of humour sprinkled everywhere were delightful. My personal favourite is their little conversation while Ginny is giving birth. Poor girl.