Re: Trailer park: noah/ren
[The magnet letter metaphor was a good one. Noah felt that way too. Not only were some not making words, they were just sticking to each other and generally causing chaos, and Noah was, like, this side of an apparent aneurysm. And as all of that was happening, the first shots were being fired in the facility. As black smoke swirled, bullets rang out, ricocheted, and, back with Ren, Noah keeled tf over. It was like fainting. He just went down. Given how they were standing, he probably banged right into Ren, and, unless the dude threw out his hands, Noah went down, right onto the hard grass on the side of the road by the sign.
If Ren checked, Noah still had life signs, obviously. He had a pulse and he was breathing. But, he couldn't be pulled out of it. It was almost like his body was alive, but, man, no one was home.]