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I fear I must also apologise for the delay in replying to your last owl. I also apologise if I caused you to worry that I had changed my mind - I have not. The delay was somewhat intentional on my part as I simply wished to have all the documents ready for you to sign before telling you any of the news.

Firstly, I like the changes you made to the love scenes, particularly the two you mentioned. Sometimes scenes where the characters are intimate work just as well, if not better, than if they were making love. You're welcome and I am glad that I could assist you.

Secondly, it would not have sat right with me at all in offering you such a paltry sum for your manuscript. Which is why you will find amongst the legal documents enclosed with this letter, details as to how and when you will be paid royalties, and how you would apply for advancements you may need on them.

Lastly, I know you will likely think this is too much and that it wasn't what you had asked me to do. However, let me tell you it is not being done wholly out of pity either. While I have not ever been in your situation I can empathise that it will not be easy for you or your boyfriend. So I imagine every little bit that you can save will help the two of you and your little one along. You may or may not think you are deserving of so much, however, I think you are.

Primrose, you are a talented writer, and if it is something you wish to continue doing then I don't think you will have any trouble in getting published in the future. I wish you all the best with your little one and your future writing efforts.