It has all come together perfectly darling. I still vote: “Severus, I don’t know how to tell you this, but I think I might have apparated us to the wrong spot.” as my personal favorite line, and the froggy hat is clearly the winning clothing item of this round. (as I know what happens next, I know the clothing gets even better, when a certain someone in a certain type of fabric appears...*ahem*...WHEE!) I love the illustration too! You win!