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happier_bunny ([info]happier_bunny) wrote in [info]qaf_scavenger,
@ 2008-09-07 13:30:00

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Current mood: calm
Entry tags:kissing contest

KISSING CONTEST entry #14
*better late than never*
BY: [info]happier_bunny
CATEGORY: Kisses: Season Four

A/N Thanks to [info]xie_xie_xie for the help and beta!



REFLECTION

I sipped my water, feeling it soothe my dry throat as the wind blew against the window. Three days after my last treatment, and I was finally keeping water down. I shivered when I leaned my forehead against the window; another never-ending winter in the Pitts.

The loft door slid open and then closed as Justin tried to be quiet. I listened to him rummaging in the kitchen as he put groceries away. A few minutes passed, and I heard his soft footsteps heading towards the bedroom before he saw me and stopped. I sensed his gaze on my back as I watched the snow falling, too exhausted to move.

Justin wrapped his arms around me, then took the water bottle from me, putting it on the windowsill. Justin’s body pressed against me, almost as cold as the window. I relaxed into him anyway, shuddering a little from the chill. I felt him heating up, warming me, as we stared out the window together.

Warm breath tickled me as Justin nuzzled my neck and lapped at it with his tongue, nibbling and sucking my skin. I let my head roll to the side and moaned as he pressed sloppy, open-mouthed kisses up and down my neck. I felt him sucking my ear and couldn’t hear the wind anymore. He shifted, slipping in front of me, hugging me close, and the cold was gone.

I leaned into him as his fingers trailed through my hair and pulled me down for a kiss. His lips are warm against mine and I kissed him back.

“Are you cold?”

“Not anymore.” I pulled him close as he nestled against me.



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[info]jule1122
2008-09-07 12:49 pm UTC (link)
That was just lovely. A beautiful, beautiful moment. Thank you for giving it to us.

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[info]happier_bunny
2008-09-08 03:38 pm UTC (link)
Thank you so much. ♥

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[info]absolutefiction
2008-09-07 12:52 pm UTC (link)
oh, wonnnnnnnderful. thank you. mmmmmmmmm.

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[info]happier_bunny
2008-09-08 03:38 pm UTC (link)
I'm glad you liked it. Thank you!

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[info]selenebj
2008-09-07 12:58 pm UTC (link)
So, so beautiful! :)

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[info]happier_bunny
2008-09-08 03:39 pm UTC (link)
awwww, thanks! ♥

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[info]outlander
2008-09-07 01:19 pm UTC (link)
*wibble*
Incredibly better late than never...
This is make me sigh and make me melt lovely.

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[info]happier_bunny
2008-09-08 05:46 pm UTC (link)
*kisses* It makes me so happy that you felt it. Thank you!

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[info]notreallyme10
2008-09-07 01:59 pm UTC (link)
Guh! What a lovely little fic. Sad and comforting at the same time. Beautiful :)

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[info]happier_bunny
2008-09-08 06:58 pm UTC (link)
Thank you bunches my dear. ♥

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[info]qafcracked
2008-09-07 03:26 pm UTC (link)
*happy sigh*

This was so perfect...

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[info]happier_bunny
2008-09-08 06:59 pm UTC (link)
That's a huge compliment coming from you. Thank you!

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[info]not_yet_defined
2008-09-07 03:54 pm UTC (link)
that was really lovely, my bunny. *licks*

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[info]happier_bunny
2008-09-08 07:02 pm UTC (link)
thank you darling NY! ♥

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[info]secretsolitaire
2008-09-07 05:01 pm UTC (link)
*melty* Oh, this is just gorgeous. ♥♥♥

Spotted a teeny tense error?

His lips are warm against mine and I kissed him back.

Should be "were" instead of "are," I think...

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[info]happier_bunny
2008-09-08 07:03 pm UTC (link)
Thank you so much! ♥

whoops, I think you're right. I'll fix that, thanks for pointing it out. :)

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[info]opal11
2008-09-07 05:33 pm UTC (link)
warm and fuzzy..thank you.. i just love to have the boys kiss..

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[info]happier_bunny
2008-09-08 07:04 pm UTC (link)
thank you for such a lovely comment. I'm glad you liked it. ♥

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[info]rosy5000
2008-09-07 05:42 pm UTC (link)
Awww! I love the peaks at the little things like this from Brian and Justin's life.

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[info]happier_bunny
2008-09-08 07:05 pm UTC (link)
Thank you muchly! I'm happy you enjoyed it. :)

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[info]besamislabios
2008-09-08 09:06 am UTC (link)
Oh Bunny, this was beautiful, and I love the undertone of sadness in it. &hearts &hearts

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[info]happier_bunny
2008-09-08 07:06 pm UTC (link)
Thank you so much my luv! I love when people can feel what I wrote. ♥

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[info]qafmaniac
2008-09-08 01:20 pm UTC (link)
♥ hearts; hearts;

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[info]happier_bunny
2008-09-08 07:06 pm UTC (link)
THANK YOU! ♥

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[info]nolyana
2008-09-08 02:12 pm UTC (link)
Enjoyed it immensely. *hugses you*

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[info]happier_bunny
2008-09-08 07:06 pm UTC (link)
I'm so glad you liked it. Thank you!

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[info]noteverything
2008-09-09 03:54 pm UTC (link)
Oh. I can't find the right words for this. I really *LOVE* it. I'm saving it to my memories...


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[info]happier_bunny
2008-09-10 05:48 pm UTC (link)
Awww, thanks so much darling Tweedy! ♥

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[info]maybe742
2008-09-14 05:10 am UTC (link)
OMG! I don't know what I should write now :( cancer-fighting!Brian and care-taking!Justin were a little bit overwhelming, they always are for me. Love it very much! Thank you for this marvelous ficlet :)

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[info]happier_bunny
2008-09-14 07:55 am UTC (link)
*cuddles you*

I'm so happy you liked this so much. Thank you!

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[info]ohfreckle
2008-10-05 04:12 pm UTC (link)
♥ *basks in the S4 love*

I'm such a sucker for Justin nestling against Brian :D

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[info]happier_bunny
2008-10-06 11:10 am UTC (link)
OH god, me too. I'm so happy you liked this one. ♥

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[info]lougenessis
2008-11-08 03:20 pm UTC (link)
Loving and beautiful.

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[info]happier_bunny
2008-11-08 05:34 pm UTC (link)
Thank you...I'm happy you liked it. :)

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[info]butternutsquash
2010-06-07 12:44 pm UTC (link)
Wow, this made me week in the knees! It's so sweet and quiet, yet perfect capture of Brian and Justin at that time.

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[info]happier_bunny
2010-06-09 05:07 pm UTC (link)
Oh such a lovely comment...thank you!

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