Thank you for quoting back the lines you liked. :) I enjoy seeing what worked for folks, but to be fair, the second line was inspired by a conversation I had with firehead30 as we were discussing the fic during the beta process, so she really does deserve part of the credit for that one.
I had a laugh that my fic took the cake on dictionary usage. :D I love learning new words and I'm glad I was able to share a few of my favorites - satyr and trollop - with you.