I got a little behind when I was at my folks' and trying to read and hide what I was reading from them and hoping the connection wouldn't crap out, so I got a few read but missed others. I'm caught up now. I missed this story when I was gone!
You know the really bad thing about this fic? It's not that your v.v. fertile imagination is concocting this crackaliously addictive, if painful to read, fic. It's that there are kids this is really happening to right this very minute. The cigarette reference was awful.
To go back a couple groups: I'm not really in favor of Brian using this story for his book. Better he should 'fess up that he was off being an idiot and an island rather than letting people know he was sick. Though it might be therapeutic for Justin to write it all down. Maybe. omg, Vamp! Get him to a shrink. He needs one.