|testdog65 (testdog65) wrote in qaf_crackfic,|
@ 2007-06-30 19:24:00
Original poster: xie_xie_xie
I was afraid it would get lost in the comments section... youbetterwiseup has drawn an image of pudgy!unhygenic!agoraphobic!asthmatic!co
I also did not realize this fic was a WIP when I made this post, since it has no plot and I
couldn't didn't read it that closely. And the author hasn't updated it for months. So, at the request of not_yet_defined, I have taken the liberty of writing an appropriate ending, which is here:
Brian is just about to plunge his thick, hard cock into Justin's tight velvety hole when a truck, careening out of control, smashes into the apartment, killing them both. Just as they are slipping away from life, Justin gazes into Brian's hazel orbs, blinking back tears from his huge blue eyes as he clutches Brian's shoulders tight in his tiny little hands.
"Brian... I never... I always thought I'd be safe in my apartment. But now I know... "
Brian blinks, and as he breaths his last breath, he smiles weakly. "Sunshine... at least you lived... for a moment..."
And they die.