I love that you shared your writing process - it's absolutely fascinating. I've just been reading a book on writing written by a behavioural scientist, who believes that there's a tendency for writers to create a mystique around their process, maybe so they'll look like geniuses who get it all right first time! He (Robert Boice) reckons we need to change that. I hope more writers here do a commentary (I haven't written anything so I can't - maybe one day - I mostly write uni essays lol). And I also love that you honour the gentleness and subtlety between B and J - it's what gets me every time. Beautiful.