I saw alicesprings pimp about using this asylum and thought maybe I'd give it a try, but I figured I should read the commentary that had already been posted to get some ideas about what to say.
This is really cool! I haven't actually read the fic, but just reading the commentary is really interesting and the snippets you included make me want to read the whole thing! I guess I should have realized, but I hadn't really thought much about how long and hard (and sometimes deep into the night :P ) authors work on really long fics. There's a whole lot of love behind the writing of QAF fanfic :)