So intense. You capture Lucius and Harry brilliantly. I think what hit me the strongest reading this was when you had Harry notice that Lucius tasted of mint and brandy and just a little of sweat and I thought... of course he does.
Your Lucius is almost a clinician of the erotic. Like a doctor, keeping a clinical distance and keeping his gloves on as he reads his 'victim', 'partner' whatever you want to call it. It only seems in stories with Severus that Lucius is matched... otherwise he seems to totally outclass the competition... poor things.