This is reallyreally on LJ ;)
Oh, thank you! This was really nice, and I LOVE how the pace of the text so obviously changes during the sex scene and gets all quick and breathless. All the "and... and" and how things just happen and happen and happen.
Favourite sentences, because that's how I comment on things ;)
"It's funny when change comes so suddenly you don't even expect it."
"that this is really just like it always was. "
"It's a familiar rhythm – that's the thing about Percy, everything rhythmic and logical and familiar and traditional," - I love this! Love it.