I knew from the end of the second paragraph I was going to love this. Percy's response to who his blind date was just confirmed it. I've got to say, I loved both of their voices. You did a great job with that. Percy agonizing over breaking a rule in order to see Neville was just priceless.
and OMG! *dies laughing* the thing to help with Neville's cramps... brilliant! The whole thing was just gorgeous, and the sex was right in tune with the rest of the story.