Oh, I loved this! Seeing the progression between Teddy's eyes and Percy's was a fabulous way to do it. And cunning Slytherin-ish Percy, lying about the Ministry making him check in weekly (was talking about Percy-as-Slytherin last weekend, in fact; he sure has the ambition).
I am SCARRED FOR LIFE.
AHAHAHAHAHA you'll get over it, Teddy. I really liked that Teddy was clearly straight (perving on Victoire's tits), but totally accepting of the fact that Percy was in love with Harry and that eventually Harry returned the affection. And Teddy's hair... *sighs* A lovely touch.