I read this only because of Teddy. So, I don't be offended when I say nothing about the Percy/Harry because I will say that I love that you kept it canon. I like Ginny. ; )
TEDDY! OMG his voice! A few points that had me laughing out loud. Oh, yeah. I saw Victoire Weasley's tits yesterday—she had on a loose blouse and she bent over, and OH MY GOD. They are fucking EPIC. LOL! EPIC!
The tension out there is ridiculous. It's like trying to breathe through a wet cloth. A wet cloth that smells of sex. Ew. I can't believe I just wrote that. I am fucking disgusting. MUAHAHAH!
And of course, his obvious flail when he's hearing Percy and Harry have sex. Love it. I love your Teddy and all his angst and weirdness and general mourning. He's wonderful