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mnemosyne_1 ([info]mnemosyne_1) wrote in [info]percy_ficathon,
Fantastic story! I love how much we see of each character in so few words - like how Victoire doesn't tell her parents that Teddy broke up with her, how awesome Charlie is and that he slept with Remus(!), Bill's snarly temper, and, of course, the relationships Teddy has and Percy.

A long silence passes now. A silence in words only, Teddy thinks, because everything around him is unbearably loud: Percy's breath, the opening of a door down the hall, the sound of a bird's wings beating in uneven time as it tries to find a perch outside on the narrow sill. When Teddy swallows, the sound is so loud it's deafening, and when he sits up, the sheets fall back to the bed like thunder.

This passage in particular is wonderful - very evocative and emotional and precise. Wonderful!

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