So I thought to myself: of course my story will come out on the second because it's my birthday! I have to thank you writer for such a lovely present! I love the unravelling Percy is undergoing; even as the end of the fic comes about.
And omg the hotness of Percy/Marcus. I feel so bad that I want Percy to continue shagging him AND Oliver. But the teeth marks -- GUH.
You know how they say good writing isn't telling someone something but showing it to them? I think you really accomplished that here in the way you displayed Percy's disconnect in the events of the week and in his thoughts. Really, really enjoyed this-- thanks again!