*sighs happily* My apologies for not reading right away - I saw that this had posted just as I was heading out the door - but it was well worth the wait!
Such beautiful, lyrical description of the summer rain, I could almost feel it myself. I like how you've shown Percy as fussy and rushed, but willing to take the time (when asked) to try slowing down - and Neville is the perfect one to make that request. Neville offering the blowjob made me giggle... good for Percy for not letting it happen. And I enjoyed the glimpse of Hermione, too.