OMG!!! *Flails* This is perfect!!! Thankyou sooo much mystery writer. Fred/George/Percy is hot!! Prefect's Bathroom is so one of my kinks. I adore water and you use it perfectly. *hyperventilates* I love Percy and him talking to himself about taking points and how seriously he takes his position as head boy. His disappointment at having to take points from Gryfindor. And then Percy getting angry at the twins for using something they didn't earn. It's just so Percy. You caught him well.
Ohh I love the robes with the names on the back. *flails @ the boys on the side of the bath* Oh what a pretty site they make.
Oh god! The kisses between those two and them standing in the water and Oh God!
Guh. The relationship you show between the twins is beautiful. It's just how I love to see them. The intensity and the tenderness and the insular nature of their relationship.
Fred's dimple and the cameos of Remus and McGonagall made me make embarrassing noises. *G*
Ohh and the map! That was genius. This really was gorgeous beyond belief. Thankyou agian so, so much.
*runs off to rec* And when the reveals are up I'd love to link to this fic from my art.