I loved the snapshot format, and you did a good job of choosing the most appropriate moments to move your story along. I don't really care for images in fics--it's definitely just my preference though, but I'm a purist that way. They were hard to read, but I did see the texts in your comments.
Poor Percy. And it's funny how we don't see many fics where Harry jilts someone other than Ginny; I like how Percy stuck to his guns, and didn't let Harry pull him back in. And Luna having that foreknowledge about Neville, then sort of giving them her blessing made me melt.
You left me wanting more. :) But it'll be enough to know that both Percy and Neville have found someone.