looking around at the many plants – Neville's – and many books – Percy's – that filled the airy living room
Aside from the fact that I want that living room, I think it's a lovely image of how the two of them fit together so wonderfully. I really like that you've shown the way two different relationships ended - how Neville still writes Luna, and how Percy and Harry don't really speak. And I'm so happy that Neville and Percy found each other at the end - they make a very sweet couple.
Also, I loved how you did the letters! With the various parchments and handwriting... wonderful!