These vampires seem more like disorganized savages than sophisticated immortals. Where is the experience of learning things from across the ages? Where is the sense of self-preservation and survival? These vampires seem to care little except for satisfying their hunger. Living from one meal to the next, it seems...
These vampires bear little resemblance to the ones on my home world. There was pride in being a vampire there, a sense of belonging to something greater than humanity; being almost god-like in power. None of that seems to bear weight here. These...beings are repulsive.