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I'm glad you tried out for this. It's been the strangest play I've ever tried to put on, but it's been fun to practice lines with you, and I do feel like you've really been improving too.
Yeah, let me sleep on it. I'm leaning towards just ignoring it, unless we throw in a line - maybe something either in that first back and forth, or something towards the end. But it'd have to be seamless and I'm not one hundred percent convinced of my ability to write in iambic perimeter.