Hrrm, I see two scene where the same notion is repeated:
"Oh, and before I forget...can you get some paper and an envelope for Jeffries over there? He said he wanted to write his mother," Angeal said, wanting to get that straight before he got distracted, glancing over at the boy's bed. (...) "Thanks," Angeal said with a nod. There was too much happening, and he wanted to take care of that with Jeffries while he was thinking about it. Basically it's saying the same thing, just worded differently.
and could hit him so hard in a way he couldn't fully understand. (...) at something in a way he didn't fully understand.
Second one could be cut out, I think.
Otherwise writing is prrrrrt. ♥♥♥♥♥ *takes editor hat off*
I love! 1) Angeal interacting with his troops -- poor one-legged kid, and how he's still weirded out when older men call him Sir, and
2) the esuna materia healing different things based on location *geeks out*
3)He was going to set something right, by the gods. Everything had been destruction and killing and he was sick of it. = *MASSIVE LOVE* I really enjoy the way Angeal reacts to Gong-gil.
4)Servants and cooks? What do they know? = ahahahaha. yeah, they're all blind, deaf, stupid and allergic to gossip. Oh, noble-born arrogance. X3
5)Park~ oooh. I love his situation in this mess, and the way he deals with the nobles and his interaction with Angeal. X3
6)Angeal hit the shortcut commands to save his work so quickly he was glad he had a special model designed to handle SOLDIER reflexes = ... X333!!!! I don't know why this bit makes me squee. XD
7)He began to see Gong-gil as his mother, I suppose. When Gong-gil 'died' in the play, His Majesty screamed out 'Mother, mother!' and ran to Gong-gil, and embraced him. :O
I'm glad I haven't looked for the movie now, because I can't tell who is lying and who isn't and that makes the fic even more suspenseful. XD
8) it was either an emergency, extremely important, or Genesis was bored, and either of the three had to be attended to immediately because the consequences of not could be world destroying. ... XDDDDDD Oh, poor Angeal. Genesis is hard to handle, huh.