Wooooot for the holes-filled-in version! I like the polish job -- I'm not entirely sure how to parse the sentence that goes "...midst of too much of it that which was in regards to the third..." but that's my only editor-hat nitpick. I'm totally looking forward to when Gong-gil gets to quit being a dollfie-with-a-pulse and gets to be a person... :3 (It makes me suspect Angeal might've reacted rather the same way to Cloud, if he'd been Cloud's mentor rather than Zack's. Zack's got enough force of personality and externalized-stubbornness, as opposed to Cloud's silent-internalized variety, that Zack wouldn't put up with being put on the shelf and protected like porcelain no matter how hard Angeal's wanna-be-a-knight-not-a-hired-thug-dammit instincts kicked in. Cloud's just enough like Gong-gil in the quiet-pretty-and-broken department that I don't think he'd have learned as much from Angeal, though I'm sure Angeal would've been just as determined to save him as Zack was.... thinkyhmm....)