16 May 2011 @ 12:02 am
Drabble Day: Hello, and Prompt No. 1  
Hi guys! Welcome to the first hour of AWZ DRABBLE DAY!!! \o/ \o/ \o/

It’s midnight here and ungodlier hours in many corners of the world. Nevertheless, your currently hosting brainthird is armed with coffee, bravado and a whip, and if I do not see drabbles popping up like daisies, I will be forced to act like this:

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DO NOT DO THIS TO ME OR YOURSELVES, I BEG OF YOU.

Okay, ready? Here's a reminder of the rules, should you need it. In short, post your drabbles to your own journals, then link them below in the comments for this prompt. (Since it's been asked - if you'd rather JUST put your drabble in the comments instead of linking to your own journal, sure, go for it - it just means that you won't get comments to it on your own journal).

Oh, right, I should give you an actual prompt, yeah?

Your prompt No. 1 is: "Personal training"

And.... GO! \o/
 
 
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Lilith: awz-jenny[info]lilithilien on May 15th, 2011 12:25 pm (UTC)
It's Personal
Headphones? Check.

Waterbottle? Check.

Borrowed… okay, technically stolen rollerblades? Check.

Audience? Jenny snuck a peek across the carpark towards the centre. Her parents were there, sitting in their respective cars, feigning telephone conversations while surreptitiously glancing her way. The upstairs office blinds betrayed Axel’s vantage point, cracked so wide she could almost make out his growing paunch. And there was Stella too, nearly tripping over an invisible crack at the sight of her competition.

So that would be another check. Check check check.

Jenny was ready for training, and for the first time in her life, it really was personal.
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Aldi: Actors: Nadine strawberry[info]aldiara on May 15th, 2011 12:55 pm (UTC)
Re: It's Personal
...nearly tripping over an invisible crack at the sight of her competition.

LOLOLOL THIS. Oh Stella, we miss you and your magical falling-down-at-the-slightest-provocation skating skills.

And the stolen rollerblades! Win.
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amo_amas_amat: jenny dance[info]amo_amas_amat on May 15th, 2011 01:13 pm (UTC)
Re: It's Personal
LOLOL "technically stolen rollerblades" I love Jenny's perception of things. Also poor Axel and his growing paunch, *sniggers*.
WIN!
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Momo: Jenny by notoriouslyuniq[info]momogermany on May 15th, 2011 04:12 pm (UTC)
Re: It's Personal
OMG, I'm so behind on everything! Can I just say that I second all previous comments,and add that starting this day off with a Jenny drabble is the best decision ever!! *glitter all over it*
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winterlover: AWZ - Jenny[info]winterlover on May 21st, 2011 02:04 pm (UTC)
Re: It's Personal
This makes me want to watch that episode again.
<333
And it makes me want to look where I put my own rollerblades.
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Aldi: AWZ: La Lena funny mouth[info]aldiara on May 15th, 2011 12:43 pm (UTC)
Breaking point
"Lower."

Lena’s professional voice is smooth as honey, and as cool. Isabelle feels sweat beading on her brow as she pushes her hips forward a little further, arches her back a little more. The ballet room is upside down, and terribly wobbly.

Lena moves into her field of inverted vision, inspecting her pose critically. "You’re shaking."

"Out… of… shape," Isabelle gasps; a mistake. The air she wastes on talking upsets her balance. The floor rushes up to meet her.

The arm around her waist that catches her is a surprise; so is Lena’s impish grin.

"We can work on that."
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Lilith: awz-izzy[info]lilithilien on May 15th, 2011 01:02 pm (UTC)
Re: Breaking point
Excellent! Not just Lena fic - Lena/Isabelle fic! Does it get any better? I love how you slip in such a beautiful description of Isabelle's bend with such precise words. Gorgeous imagery!
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amo_amas_amat: i like to be here[info]amo_amas_amat on May 15th, 2011 01:10 pm (UTC)
Re: Breaking point
fdsivk;lc mvd LENA/ISABELLE I WANTS MOARRRRRR.

Impish Lena is so sexy. Gahhh *loves*
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Christine: DenizYY[info]spaghettitoes on May 15th, 2011 01:12 pm (UTC)
Re: Breaking point
Oh dear - you and Anna are out to fry my mind aren't you! Lena/Isabelle....

Also

LENA'S IMPISH GRIN!
Oh Lena.
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Momo: Iz giggycute by Aldi[info]momogermany on May 15th, 2011 04:08 pm (UTC)
Re: Breaking point
Oh yes! How much do I want these two to rock this! Girl power FTW!
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alsha: Being Human: LOL[info]alsha on May 16th, 2011 05:16 am (UTC)
Re: Breaking point
*cheers* Oh this is what I like to see :D
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amo_amas_amat: mike glasses[info]amo_amas_amat on May 15th, 2011 12:58 pm (UTC)
Personal or Training
Lars watches Mike take the skaters through their training. Not that Mike is paying them much attention. Mike’s definition of personal training is somewhat questionable. Roman certainly has questions about it often enough.

Lars is probably one of the few people who knows it depends on the context.

Mike cocks his head at him and gives him a surreptitious wink - the slut - but Lars can’t help licking his lips in response. He’ll show him personal fucking training. For one - Lars wants it perfectly clear - it does not qualify as an excuse to get out of bed.
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Aldi: AWZ: Mike Do Go On[info]aldiara on May 15th, 2011 01:03 pm (UTC)
Re: Personal or Training
LARS! MIKE!! *spazzes on mere grounds of pairing alone*

*then spazzes some more about the drabble itself* Questionable definitions! Lars being all grumpy and annoyed and L'arsish! Mike with the slutty wink! Hahahah, aw man, I miss these two so much. Also, mrooowwwwww. "personal fucking training" is eliciting all sorts of NSFW imagery in my head right now *paws*
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Lilith: awz-lars[info]lilithilien on May 15th, 2011 01:04 pm (UTC)
Re: Personal or Training
<333333 What an awesome situation you've sketched! Love the punch line, I can imagine them arguing over this frequently!
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Christine: L'Arse[info]spaghettitoes on May 15th, 2011 01:14 pm (UTC)
Re: Personal or Training
LARS
LAAAAAAAARS!
*whispers* Lars

(well someone had to do it!)
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Christine: IngoBlues[info]spaghettitoes on May 15th, 2011 01:08 pm (UTC)
That's so gay!
Florian bit his lip.

The pain it causes and his crinkling forehead create a perfect expression of pained exasperation.

Deniz pats his back sympathetically, “Don’t take it so hard. Refs make bad calls all the time.”

Florian nods and opens the sports magazine, hand curving supportively over his mouth as he tries to read.

Habits are heard to break. But then words just used to be words; people knew what you meant despite what you said. It didn’t stop casually cursed words hurting the wrong people.

Florian’s aggravation would be silent until his father’s words stop falling from his mouth.
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Aldi: AWZ: Florian is thoughtful[info]aldiara on May 15th, 2011 01:13 pm (UTC)
Re: That's so gay!
Aw, this is lovely. Reminds of the Florian I actually liked, before Show screwed him up. Love the line about "words just used to be words". And supportive!Deniz FTW!
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amo_amas_amat: mascara tick[info]amo_amas_amat on May 15th, 2011 01:52 pm (UTC)
Re: That's so gay!
Guh! That last line. It hurts so good.
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winterlover: AWZ - Flo Frank staring[info]winterlover on May 21st, 2011 02:21 pm (UTC)
Re: That's so gay!
I like this a lot, every time I read it, this German proverb comes to my mind:
"Selbsterkenntnis ist der erste Schritt zur Besserung."
(like: "Self-awareness is the first step to improvement")
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Momo: Lena by Graspthethorn[info]momogermany on May 15th, 2011 01:42 pm (UTC)
Chance of a Lifetime
“Oh Lena! This is so incredible! A chance of a lifetime. The French Riviera! The Casino! The yachts! I'm so envious“
Annette Bergmann twirled her younger sister around the kitchen.

“But how did you it anyway? You're not pulling my leg, are you?” Annette let her down, frowning suspiciously.

“No”, Lena smiled. “Remember that Swedish girl I met on my last seminar. Her former co-trainer used his connections and got her the job. And now, with the wedding coming up in less than two month, she called for some extra help to get the groom into shape.
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amo_amas_amat: research[info]amo_amas_amat on May 15th, 2011 01:58 pm (UTC)
Re: Chance of a Lifetime
HAHAHAHA MOMO This is ideal. You are championing the "get Lena to the Riviera" campaign. <33
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Aldi: AWZ: La Lena funny mouth[info]aldiara on May 15th, 2011 02:20 pm (UTC)
Re: Chance of a Lifetime
I am shipping Lena and the Swedish girl. I CANNOT HELP IT. Lena will get the groom in shape just in time for him to stand gaping as Lena elopes with the bride. At the French Riviera! omg I need follow-up on this.

Also very much approving of the scheme to get all the sparkly characters FAR FAR AWAY from the sucky place fictional Essen has become! <3
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Momo: Gossip Fairies by Aldi[info]momogermany on May 15th, 2011 02:58 pm (UTC)
Re: Chance of a Lifetime
You will find the follow up to this in the yellow press rag of your choice on July 8th. Man, and I thought I was dropping too many anvils!
Swedish!Fitness!Trainer with Royal!Connections! Riviera!Wedding! Overweight!Groom! LOL!
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Aldi: Actors: Nadine strawberry[info]aldiara on May 15th, 2011 03:01 pm (UTC)
Re: Chance of a Lifetime
LOL. *hides* IT IS VERY VERY LATE, OKAY. MY BRAIN CANNOT BE EXPECTED TO BE FUNCTIONAL. OMG.
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antiteb: [gen] Vulkan[info]antiteb on May 15th, 2011 02:50 pm (UTC)
Ich werde nie erwachsen
Ben hasste das „Personal Training“ in Mailand. Warum hatte er sich darauf eingelassen? Nur weil irgendetwas ihm gesagt hatte, dass er sich verändern müsse, bevor er nach Essen zurückkehren durfte? Weil für ein Kind in Essen kein Platz mehr war? Weil er erwachsen werden musste? Auch wenn er es in seinem Kopf und seinem Herzen niemals werden würde? Niemals wollte?

Und trotzdem stemmte Ben Gewichte, schlug auf einen Boxsack ein und wunderte sich, dass er sich täglich mehr veränderte. Seine Gesichtszüge wurden schärfer, seine Fäuste härter. Sein Körper verwandelte sich. Glücklich wurde er nicht. Nicht in Mailand, nicht in Essen.
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Aldi: AWZ: Ben Oh Show[info]aldiara on May 15th, 2011 02:57 pm (UTC)
Re: Ich werde nie erwachsen
Gah. Ich kann mit Ben ja mittlerweile nur noch äußerst wenig anfangen, aber dein Drabble gab mir glatt nen Stich ins Herz. Sehr schön umrissen, diese Veränderung, mit wenigen Worten (ist ja eher schwierig, bei nem 100-Wort Limit!). Mir gefällt vor allem die Nüchternheit der letzten zwei Sätze. So knapp, so treffend. Autsch.
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Momo: vanessa by geogiakerr[info]momogermany on May 15th, 2011 03:02 pm (UTC)
Re: Ich werde nie erwachsen
Ich liebe deine Geschichte. Eine wunderschöne und clevere Erklärung für die Metamorphose, die Ben vor all unserer Augen durchgemacht hat, lol!

Und ich merke mal wieder wie sehr ich den "alten" Ben vermisse.
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winterlover: AWZ - Ben2[info]winterlover on May 21st, 2011 02:45 pm (UTC)
Re: Ich werde nie erwachsen
Das Drabble hätte ich fast verpasst. Gut, dass die Masterlist existiert!
Wäre schade gewesen.
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4nn4: hmm...[info]4nn4 on May 15th, 2011 10:28 pm (UTC)
Getting better (wait- what? is this my first fic ever??)
Roman concentrated on some indefinable point in the room, holding back his tears. He wanted to think of that song he heard yesterday. He'd skate the perfect routine to it and get standing ovations and teddy bears.

He did that every time – it became something of his personal training.

His father's palm first hitting his cheek was still imprinted in his memory. He'd gasped, then cried, showing him just how much it hurt.

So now, after every insult, every slap in the face, he played a story in his head, ignored the pain.

He got better at it every day.
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Aldi: AWZ: Roman is broken (Je t'aime shirt)[info]aldiara on May 16th, 2011 03:42 am (UTC)
Re: Getting better (wait- what? is this my first fic ever??)
God, this breaks my heart. Oh Roman :CCCCC

Also, if this is your first fic ever, I WANT MORE. This is such a poignant little character study, capturing so much in those few words. Beautiful job!
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4nn4: DeRo hug[info]4nn4 on May 18th, 2011 08:41 am (UTC)
Re: Getting better (wait- what? is this my first fic ever??)
*cuddles* thank youuuu

not sure there will be any more fic from me, this kinda just popped into my head, so I thought: might as well give it a shot. but I don't think it will become a real hobby :P
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winterlover: AWZ - Roman melancholy[info]winterlover on May 21st, 2011 02:49 pm (UTC)
Re: Getting better (wait- what? is this my first fic ever??)
I really like your small glimpse into Roman's mind. How he's learned to ignore the pain.

Makes me think of today, if he's still doing it like this???
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